JulietteTS#10

I met Kreem again at NSNX. He had the same essay for me about his favorite teacher Salem. This time, the organization was perfect. He had the correct paragraph structure and his sentences had a logical flow. The ideas were paired together well, and he accurately used new vocabulary words. Since his organization was good, I moved on to grammar. Kreem seems to make a lot of article errors. He also always makes the mistake of not putting an s after a verb with a singular pronoun. I saw this mistake in almost every instance of a verb with a singular pronoun. I graded the paper by first going through and making editorial markings on the page. Then I had him read-through and ask me about any markings he did not understand. After that, we went through each mistake one-by-one, and I helped him figure out what went wrong. After all the mistakes were corrected, the paper looked really good. I told him to now add in all the edits we made into one last final draft.